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Bucket and Flea: The show is ready for viewing

Posted by StomachBug - January 29th, 2012


Here it is, my first animation! You can watch it at ze link below:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/
589064

Remember to let me know what you think. I plan to get into doing more animation and the next step is doing voice work and lip sync.

Enjoy!

Awra best

Stomach


Comments

I think it impressed a lot, since it's your first.

It looks a bit choppy at some points, but then again it is your first. I think the stuff you need to improve with, is stuff that improves with practice =)
Overall, fine animation.

Only problem is, it doesn't really keep one hanging in there, it's a bit long and boring if you get my point. I have the same problem in my animations.

Thanks I'm glad you liked it.

As far as pacing goes I guess that's something I need to practice too. I'm a big fan of saying little but describing a lo. Brevity is the soul of wit and all that hehe but hopefully my next one will be a bit snappier

Good luck with the next one, I'm trying to set off on my next one aswell but I'm in a bit of a dryspell.

I read an awesome book about timing and pacing (aswell as many other aspects in animation)
<a href="http://books.google.se/books?id=QdOZk">http://books.google.se/books?id=QdOZk </a> S6eJl8C&printsec=frontcover&h l=sv&source=gbs_ge_summary_r&
cad=0#v=onepage&q&f=false

It's a lot of "do-it-yourself", so it's a good book :)

awesome stuff, you're one of the only people I've seen who did a PD parody hehe. The link to this book is broken, could you tell me the name of the book? I think it might be the holy grail for me at this point