Here it is, my first animation! You can watch it at ze link below:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/
589064
Remember to let me know what you think. I plan to get into doing more animation and the next step is doing voice work and lip sync.
Enjoy!
Awra best
Stomach
JonHunter
I think it impressed a lot, since it's your first.
It looks a bit choppy at some points, but then again it is your first. I think the stuff you need to improve with, is stuff that improves with practice =)
Overall, fine animation.
Only problem is, it doesn't really keep one hanging in there, it's a bit long and boring if you get my point. I have the same problem in my animations.
StomachBug
Thanks I'm glad you liked it.
As far as pacing goes I guess that's something I need to practice too. I'm a big fan of saying little but describing a lo. Brevity is the soul of wit and all that hehe but hopefully my next one will be a bit snappier